This is one of my writing.
One rainy midnight I was running into a random forest with snakes,spiders and sea lions I can see nothing but blackness all I can hear is wolf’s howling (howling) .my heart beating fast as flash I was running as fast as flash and while I was running I ran into a dragon called the ender dragon.The ender dragon is all dark black.The ender dragon sounds like a dark black exterminator.The ender dragon smells like a poisonous bottle. so I fight the ender dragon but I only had a bow and arrow and a flaming iron sword. So I used my bow and arrow.the arrows hit the ender dragon in the forehead five times and It took 20 health points but the ender dragon has 100 and he healed ten of them. I throw my iron sword at the ender dragon head and there was blood orbs everywhere and it took 90 health points and he’s slain. Then I saw a big venom black egg so I picked the big venom black egg in my backpack and I jumped into the port hole and it brings me back to my spawn point.
Something that challenged me was trying to remember what to write because I get a idea but I forget. I forget my ideas when I am writing.
I am learning to put in my vocab to ad detale (detail) so my writing can get more interesting for the reader.
I am proud of my writing because I put in a lot of interesting word's for the reader and I went back into my writing to ad in detale (detail) and to make some changes.
One rainy midnight I was running into a random forest with snakes,spiders and sea lions I can see nothing but blackness all I can hear is wolf’s howling (howling) .my heart beating fast as flash I was running as fast as flash and while I was running I ran into a dragon called the ender dragon.The ender dragon is all dark black.The ender dragon sounds like a dark black exterminator.The ender dragon smells like a poisonous bottle. so I fight the ender dragon but I only had a bow and arrow and a flaming iron sword. So I used my bow and arrow.the arrows hit the ender dragon in the forehead five times and It took 20 health points but the ender dragon has 100 and he healed ten of them. I throw my iron sword at the ender dragon head and there was blood orbs everywhere and it took 90 health points and he’s slain. Then I saw a big venom black egg so I picked the big venom black egg in my backpack and I jumped into the port hole and it brings me back to my spawn point.
Something that challenged me was trying to remember what to write because I get a idea but I forget. I forget my ideas when I am writing.
I am learning to put in my vocab to ad detale (detail) so my writing can get more interesting for the reader.
I am proud of my writing because I put in a lot of interesting word's for the reader and I went back into my writing to ad in detale (detail) and to make some changes.
