Holiday writing

On Sunday afternoon after mum and dad were at the market Zane,mum,dad,my sister Rachael and I went in dads car to Palmerston North to drop my sister Rachel off at university.We went to Rachael's new room to drop her bags off.Her room was small and dirty and the curtains had bad flowers on them.Next we drove to the motel that was close to the shops.After the long drive I was car sick but I did not throw up. We were in room 4 at the motel.The motel had a TV,a fold out couch and 2 beds.After we looked at our room we went to Chinatown to get some dinner and I had rice,noodles,chips,spring rolls,won tons and sweet and sour pork but I didn't use chopsticks .Then we went back to the motel and dropped Zane,dad and me off and mum and Rachel went to the university.Zane got scared from the hail and a story called lights out that dad told him about because Zane thought it was real.I slept on 1 of the bed’s and Zane slept on the fold out couch.On Monday morning Zane and I got up and packed our stuff ready to go home and so did mum and dad.Finally we left the motel and drove to McDonald to get breakfast.When I walked into McDonald I smelled delicious hot cakes so Zane and I ordered them.At last we finished our breakfast and drove home but we left Rachel at Palmerston North.


I have been learning to use my managing distrachin muscle
something that has challenged me is all the hard words and all the vocab


I have been working on my writing with the all the best vocab

I am proud of my writing because of all the vocab.

Groups to 100

I went to a workshop about making gropes(groups) to 100. I know I need to make the tens place add to 90 and the ones add to 10. When I first started learning I was in the learning pit and I used my perseverance muscle to keep trying. I know groups to10 so it's easy.

matariki

Totara whanau has been doing matariki to celebrate the maori new year.

Me doing my tukutuku panel.

Oliver,Dan,Cam and Ryan carving 

Ezra and Naghede doing tukutuku panles.

Lachlan and Hunta cooking

Angus and Kieron cooking

Ben and his group in kites 

Jacob v sewing

me doing my tuku panels.

Totara hub getting their kie.

Something that has challenge me is doing the tuku panels. it was hard because I have never done it before. we had to use flake string and it was tricky getting the string throw the tiny hole and doing the notes
I have been working on my tuku tuku panels  for allot of time on matariki
I am proud of my tuku tuku panels because I didn't give up when it got hard.
I was making the steps to heaven design.

Writing

Do you like milk because I do.  You can make lots of things like butter & ice Cream. How about I show you how to make ice cream!!!

WHAT YOU NEED TO MAKE ICE CREAM!!!!.

½  cup of milk

1 bag of crushed ice

2 cups of salt

¼ cup lid of vanilla essence

30 grams of sugar

1 large & small zip lock bag

1 ice cream container

*1. Fill ½ a large ziplock bag with ice.

*2. Tip Slowly 2 cups of salt in the salty ice bag.

*3. Shake the bag of salty ice a little.

*4.Tip ½ a cup of milk into the small bag.

*5. Pour 2 caps of vanilla essence in the small bag.

*6. Put the small bag into the big bag.

*7. Slide the big bag with the small bag inside into the ice cream container.

*8. Shake the ice cream container slowly.

*9. Shake the ice cream container with the ice cream for 5 or 10 minutes.

*10. Open the big bag and grab the bag of ice cream.

This is my ice with salt on top

This is more milk

This is more ice

This is pouring salt

This is the cold ice

This is as with more sugar

This is as pouring sugar

Hear is the milk that then tern into ice cream. 

i have been learning to make ice cream out of milk and watching it change from liquid to soled(solid). 

i am proud of starting with verb's  in every sentins (sentence) because its a achon word and I had to change my sentence to swop (swap)arond.

art

I have been learning to blend the colors by overlapping over the colors.It was a challenge for me because it was hard to known what colors go together.  I am proud of learning how to blend colors because its my first time blending colors.

I am proud of blending colors because it's my first ever time.

I am learning to blend colors together.

Something that has challenged me is getting the colors that look the same colors.

I have been working on making my art towards the sea or the sky and it gets smaller.

I am Poem

This is my I am poem

I am a rugby player.

I wonder if I could do good in rugby.

I hear my dog barking.

I see my favorite friends.

I want to meet new people.

I am a rugby player.

I pretend to be a gamer.

I feel fear.

I touch my basket ball.

I worry about my friends.

I cry when people die.

I am a rugby player.

I understand my family's love symbol is a star.

I say hello.

I dream of being a gamer

I try to be good.

I hope my mum has a good mum ‘s day.

I am a rugby player.

Something that has challenged me is knowing what to write.
I am proud of my I am poem because it's helping me with good word's.

writing

This is one of my writing.

One rainy midnight I was running into a random forest with snakes,spiders and sea lions I can see nothing but blackness all I can hear is wolf’s howling (howling) .my heart beating fast as flash I was running as fast as flash and while I was running I ran into a dragon called the ender dragon.The ender dragon is all dark black.The ender dragon sounds like a dark black exterminator.The ender dragon smells like a poisonous bottle. so I fight the ender dragon but I only had a bow and arrow and a flaming iron  sword. So I used my bow and arrow.the arrows hit the ender dragon in the forehead five times and It took 20 health points  but the ender dragon has 100 and he healed ten of them. I throw my iron sword at the ender dragon head and there was blood orbs everywhere and  it took 90 health points  and he’s slain. Then I saw a big venom black egg so I picked the big venom black egg in my backpack and I jumped into the port hole and it brings me back to my spawn point.


Something that challenged me was trying to remember what to write because I get a idea but I forget. I forget my ideas when I am writing.

I am learning to put in my vocab to ad detale (detail) so my writing can get more interesting for the reader.

I am proud of my writing because I put in a lot of interesting word's for the reader and I went back into my writing to ad in detale (detail) and to make some changes.